tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post1006601305102345994..comments2023-09-30T01:41:39.018+13:00Comments on Nevaeh@Hornby High School: fire on the port hills Blog Admin 2025http://www.blogger.com/profile/11121296208332937074noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-72209640893687812302017-03-29T10:44:01.094+13:002017-03-29T10:44:01.094+13:00Kia ora Nevaeh it's Zoey here.
I like how you ...Kia ora Nevaeh it's Zoey here.<br />I like how you said very descriptive words.<br />Next time you could use punctuation.<br />Do you wonder if all the people survived?<br />Maybe next time you could re-read your story. <br /><br /> <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-37243939116235691952017-03-29T10:43:31.644+13:002017-03-29T10:43:31.644+13:00Bonjour,Nevaeh
I was reading this post and I loved...Bonjour,Nevaeh<br />I was reading this post and I loved it the wow words in there.<br />How you had empathy for the farmers how you cared about it so much.<br />How did you feel?Bye. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-62598759085600646472017-03-29T10:37:51.632+13:002017-03-29T10:37:51.632+13:00Konichiwa Nevaeh.
This is a great story love some...Konichiwa Nevaeh.<br />This is a great story love some of the descriptive words.<br />Maybe next time make the paragraphs bigger other than that I love it.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-32356658478098241072017-03-24T10:43:35.403+13:002017-03-24T10:43:35.403+13:00Ni Hao Nevaeh it's Jake here from Rimu class.
...Ni Hao Nevaeh it's Jake here from Rimu class.<br />My positive is that you've used really well wow words.<br />just at the top your first bit you haven't put a capital I.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-13009193634430358842017-03-24T10:04:34.788+13:002017-03-24T10:04:34.788+13:00Kia ora Nevaeh Tyler here.
I like the way you told...Kia ora Nevaeh Tyler here.<br />I like the way you told us how the farmers might feel.<br />Next time could you write a little bit more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-47803030128652729532017-03-24T09:53:19.580+13:002017-03-24T09:53:19.580+13:00Kia ora Nevaeh.
I love this story that you did bec...Kia ora Nevaeh.<br />I love this story that you did because it gave me some information<br />and how the people felt.<br />Next time can you maybe put a slide?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-7591216110194779922017-03-24T09:44:42.232+13:002017-03-24T09:44:42.232+13:00Kiaora Nevaeh its Aryan here looking at your blog!...Kiaora Nevaeh its Aryan here looking at your blog!<br />I like how you put good vocabulary in here.<br />Next time make it a bit longer.<br />Anyways amazing post!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-7759995421906877302017-03-22T10:00:05.904+13:002017-03-22T10:00:05.904+13:00i liked how you were described the sky great work ...i liked how you were described the sky great work nevaehAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-12446030934199972772017-03-22T09:55:28.486+13:002017-03-22T09:55:28.486+13:00i liked how you described how you glazed at the an...i liked how you described how you glazed at the and it was and you did't want the animals to die great work Nevaeh Ethan H :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-74554677403098870322017-03-22T09:52:48.656+13:002017-03-22T09:52:48.656+13:00that is cool Nevaeh you rote more then me on my fi...that is cool Nevaeh you rote more then me on my fire story. that is amazing. because I found it so hard to write that much on my fire story. because I find it so hard to write a lot.<br />from kevin. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-38381254429338811672017-03-22T09:47:49.178+13:002017-03-22T09:47:49.178+13:00Hi Nevaeh it's Miss Johnstone here. This is a ...Hi Nevaeh it's Miss Johnstone here. This is a great story! I love the part where you have described the sky looking as grey as a pencil. You have used some wow words in here too! I wonder if you could think of a powerful ending to finish your story off. Chloe Johnstonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04172291776466428567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2844263197732486823.post-35227190810703310182017-03-22T09:45:37.415+13:002017-03-22T09:45:37.415+13:00I like the port hill story it looks cool keep it u...I like the port hill story it looks cool keep it up by bailey.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com