The Day It All Went Wrong
こんにちは means hello in Japanese
boys and girls Today I did some writing on the day it all went wrong. here it is:
The Day It All Went Wrong
In a bright and colorful land there layed a mother and a ten year old girl called clear she love the name clear.
They love the land they lived there all by themselves it was not even imaginable that is how amazing it is.
One day they went out for a walk and it was a new way her mum found as she was looking for fruit and veggies.
They walked through the bush and clear walked through the wrong bush so she did not know how to get back home.
She was yelling for help but then she thought no one would hear her.
But someone did hear her a little fairy clear gasped “WOW” a real FAIRY I did not think they are real but now I do.
The fairy said I will help you get home.
Meanwhile Mum was very frightened because it was a big land and clear would never just walk away like the.
“Now follow me” the fairy said so she did and they made there way home.
They got home and her mum was reefed and it turned out that the mum new the fairy.
“Thank you blossom” Mum said “that's ok pearl” said the fairy.
Next time I want to do more detail
bye for now
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