I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora, my name Hannah I really like your little sister's award. Did you think about Putting a picture of your sister in the post. You can improve on doing a bit more writing.
Kia ora, my name Hannah I really like your little sister's award. Did you think about Putting a picture of your sister in the post. You can improve on doing a bit more writing.
hey Nevaeh it's Roxanne from Rimu, I like how you posted this it show's a lot of love to your sister. I like how you made this to. Next time maybe add more to this but it's good too.
Hey it's TJ here from Rimu class Love it and cross country is hard and I will keep on trying but it is good. And I love running to school because it get me fit keep the good work up I hope I see you at school bye now.
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my sister marsali came third in the cross country
It is nice to see you are proud of your sisters achievement Nevaeh! Maybe you could make your blog a little bigger next time?
ReplyDeleteKia ora, my name Hannah
ReplyDeleteI really like your little sister's award.
Did you think about Putting a picture of your sister in the post.
You can improve on doing a bit more writing.
Kia ora, my name Hannah
ReplyDeleteI really like your little sister's award.
Did you think about Putting a picture of your sister in the post.
You can improve on doing a bit more writing.
GOO!! JOB! :-)
ReplyDeleteHi I am payton.jai and I Love it and it is cool too.
ReplyDeletehey Nevaeh it's Roxanne from Rimu,
ReplyDeleteI like how you posted this it show's a lot of love to your sister. I like how you made this to. Next time maybe add more to this but it's good too.
Hey it's TJ here from Rimu class Love it and cross country is hard and I will keep on trying but it is good. And I love running to school because it get me fit keep the good work up I hope I see you at school bye now.
ReplyDeleteHi Neveah Safiyya here Amazing well done Kapi! My question is what day did you get it?
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