Thursday, August 17, 2017

My Writing

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I'm back and today i'm going to look at my progress in  writing .

This one here is from last year:
On monday afternoon  I went outside. ‘It’s as grey as a pencil out here’’ I thought to myself. I gazed at the mountains and they were as dark as could be.

The farmers were probably not surprised by the fires, because the grass had been brown and crispy dry. They had to help all of the animals on their farms. I’m sure some for the animals did not make it.

The farmers are likely thinking about rebuilding.

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Next time I'll need to be more descriptive words. 

Here is the better quality doc:

                                            This was a inbro mint It has a lot of information then last time.

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