I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello for Homeroom we had to make a document on what a haiku is aboutand then make an example and screen record out selfs reading it aloud so here is my screen chastity
Aloha Neveah it is Michaela here. I really enjoy watching your video about what is a haiku. I like that you were talking clearing when you were talking. Maybe next's time you can proof read it the top paragraph. Did you enjoy making your own haiku?. Anyway Nevaeh it was a good blog post.
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Aloha Neveah it is Michaela here. I really enjoy watching your video about what is a haiku. I like that you were talking clearing when you were talking. Maybe next's time you can proof read it the top paragraph. Did you enjoy making your own haiku?. Anyway Nevaeh it was a good blog post.
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