I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Nevaeh, my name is Skye and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like your dream vacation, it would be paradise for me. I love the shape of your island and the idea of finding a marble house would be awesome! Maybe you could write a bit more on your blog post explaining what you had to do. If you would like to have a look at my blog that would be great so if you want to, copy and paste this: http://wpsskyep.blogspot.co.nz/ Blog you later!-Skye
Hi there Nevaeh my name is Tipiloma from Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you talked about were I would go and what I would do and what I would see. It reminded me of when I went to Tonga in the holidays. I think you could have gone back and proofread your writing and put some more information in your writing. If you want to check out my blog here it is http://wpstipilomaa.blogspot.com/.
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Hi Nevaeh, my name is Skye and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like your dream vacation, it would be paradise for me. I love the shape of your island and the idea of finding a marble house would be awesome! Maybe you could write a bit more on your blog post explaining what you had to do. If you would like to have a look at my blog that would be great so if you want to, copy and paste this: http://wpsskyep.blogspot.co.nz/
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Hi there Nevaeh my name is Tipiloma from Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you talked about were I would go and what I would do and what I would see. It reminded me of when I went to Tonga in the holidays. I think you could have gone back and proofread your writing and put some more information in your writing. If you want to check out my blog here it is http://wpstipilomaa.blogspot.com/.
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