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Monday, June 18, 2018

My Journal

hay guys and girls today I have done a bit of my journal an I would like you to read it here it is:
Next time I want to write a bit more than I have done but I hope you like it and I have some photos of what I feel what it would look like Bye!!❤️ 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Nevaeh, my name is Skye and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like your dream vacation, it would be paradise for me. I love the shape of your island and the idea of finding a marble house would be awesome! Maybe you could write a bit more on your blog post explaining what you had to do. If you would like to have a look at my blog that would be great so if you want to, copy and paste this: http://wpsskyep.blogspot.co.nz/
    Blog you later!-Skye

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  2. Hi there Nevaeh my name is Tipiloma from Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you talked about were I would go and what I would do and what I would see. It reminded me of when I went to Tonga in the holidays. I think you could have gone back and proofread your writing and put some more information in your writing. If you want to check out my blog here it is http://wpstipilomaa.blogspot.com/.

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