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Friday, October 22, 2021

English

 Kia ora, bonjour, Hola, Guten Tag, Konnichiwa, Nǐn hǎo, Salve and Zdravstvuyte 


So in English, we are working on our punctuation to make sure we are ready for year ten. To make sure we are using the right punctuation in our writing. We got put into groups and we had to learn about the punctuation we had been given, the groups are Ampersand, Ellipsis, and Semicolon. We had to fix the sentences with the proper punctuation, here are the sentences.


Unfixed ones:

  1. “You are looking in the wrong direction” said the detective. 

  2. His favorite old television shows are “I love Lucy” “Batman” and “Bonanza”

  3. “If you want to go outside” said Mrs Clark “you must wear your raincoats”

  4. “Yes, it’s an important clue” replied Vance “But more important is the time of the call”

  5. “Rarely” the doctor observed “has anyone survived such a fall” 

  6. At camp we sang “Daisy, Daisy”  Oh! Susannah” and “Skip to My Lou.”  


  1. My Favourite “Christmas carol is Silent Night

  2. The poem he chose to read was “Ode to a Grecian.”

  3. The title of the seventh chapter was “Tough” Luck.

  4. “Have Funds, and Will Travel” was the most useful article in the Newspaper. 

  5. Michael Jackson’s song “Thriller was a hit” in the 1980s

  6. “Earthquake” Terror is a story in our reading textbook

  7. King Midas and the Golden Touch “is one of the myths in our textbook”

  8. The Beatles Can’t “Buy Me” love hit the top of the song chart when it came out




Fixed ones:


  1. “You are looking in the wrong direction,” said the detective. 


  1. His favourite old television shows are “I love Lucy,” “Batman” and “Bonanza.” 


  1. “If you want to go outside you must wear your raincoats.”


  1. “Yes, it’s an important clue,” replied Vance, “but more important is the time of the call.” 


  1. “Rarely” the doctor observed “has anyone survived such a fall?”


  1. At camp, we sang “Daisy, Daisy,”  Oh! Susannah” and “Skip to My Lou.” 


 

  1. My Favourite Christmas carol is “Silent Night.” 


  1. The poem he chose to read was “Ode to a Grecian.”


  1. The title of the seventh chapter was “Tough Luck.”


  1. “Have Funds, and Will Travel” was the most useful article in the Newspaper.   


  1. No, it’s not it should be written like this- Michael Jackson’s song “Thriller” was a 


  1. “Earthquake Terror” is a story in our textbook.


  1. “Kings Midas and The Golden Touch” is one of the myths in our textbooks.


  1. The Beatles “Can’t Buy Me Love” hit the top of the song charts when it came out.  

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