I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Nevaeh Tyler blogging. I like the way you said what the positions were. Next time could you add a little bit more to it because for me it was a little bit short.
Bonjour Nevaeh Sita here! You have a really cool blog post its a good topic to write about! I like how you put in a template of what the court looks like it shows us what type of court we should be playing on. I like how you told us all of the positions that we should have aswell! This blog post is really good but maybe you should tell us what all of the positions have to do so we know. I have a question, do you have a good name for a netball team and if you do you should reply and tell us. Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!! Bye! :):):)
Salam Nevaeh it's me Elham. I love how you have put in your photo in the blog post, and it's really good that you have shown the netball court. When did you make this? What position do you play?
Kia ora Nevaeh Chloe here I am just checking out you're blog. This blog post is awesome because all the descriptive words and all the great information you have giving to me.This make's me automatically know right that is netball.I love how you have said all the places.Have you said all of them? I wonder if you'll put some pictures in so we can get a idea of what netball is as some people don't know what netball is.
Fakalofa lahi atu Nevaeh! I really like how you explained how to play netball, it was was really easy and fun to read. Maybe next time make your drawing bigger or your words bigger so we can see it clear.
Hey Nevaeh it's Roxy here from Rimu, I'm just checking in what you have been doing in class and what you have been posting. I like how you have put steps like 1,2,3,4, and more. I like also how you have put a photo of you under made by and what you enjoyed. I think you did really well on this post with all the steps and that good job and keep it up.
Fakalofa lahi atu Nevaeh I like how you did how to play netball and the thing you need to play. You helped me with the positions. Next time can you maybe put a video of people playing the netball game. Keep this all up and i can not wait for more.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Nevaeh Sonny here and I love how you set it up and put it in order and your next step is to make it into a video .
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Hi Nevaeh Tyler blogging.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said what the positions were.
Next time could you add a little bit more to it because for me it was a little bit short.
Bonjour Nevaeh Sita here!
ReplyDeleteYou have a really cool blog post its a good topic to write about! I like how you put in a template of what the court looks like it shows us what type of court we should be playing on. I like how you told us all of the positions that we should have aswell! This blog post is really good but maybe you should tell us what all of the positions have to do so we know. I have a question, do you have a good name for a netball team and if you do you should reply and tell us.
Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!!
Bye! :):):)
Salam Nevaeh it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteI love how you have put in your photo in the blog post, and it's really good that you have shown the netball court.
When did you make this?
What position do you play?
Kia ora Nevaeh it is Camryn I read your instructions I think that I might do the same thing but rugby I hope you keep the good work up.
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ReplyDeleteChloe here I am just checking out you're blog.
This blog post is awesome because all the descriptive words and all the great information you have giving to me.This make's me automatically know right that is netball.I love how you have said all the places.Have you said all of them?
I wonder if you'll put some pictures in so we can get a idea of what netball is as some people don't know what netball is.
Fakalofa lahi atu Nevaeh!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you explained how to play netball, it was was really easy and fun to read. Maybe next time make your drawing bigger or your words bigger so we can see it clear.
Hey Nevaeh it's Roxy here from Rimu,
ReplyDeleteI'm just checking in what you have been doing in class and what you have been posting. I like how you have put steps like 1,2,3,4, and more. I like also how you have put a photo of you under made by and what you enjoyed. I think you did really well on this post with all the steps and that good job and keep it up.
From you dearing friend Roxy
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ReplyDeleteFakalofa lahi atu Nevaeh
ReplyDeleteI like how you did how to play netball and the thing you need to play.
You helped me with the positions. Next time can you maybe put a video of people playing the netball game.
Keep this all up and i can not wait for more.
Very nice,Thank you for your information.
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