Hey in Music Hurumanu we had a really simple sentence and we had to make them more interesting.
The music was loud.
last night the music was loud.
Last night the pop music was loud.
last night the pop music was loud in the garage.
last night the pop music was echoing loud in the garage.
There were two other simple sentences like she played the guitar and he was singing.
Next time I would like to do she played the guitar or he was singing.
BYE.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Nevaeh!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you add some pictures that related to what your talking about. I also like the way you put some interesting adjectives such as "Echoing". But perhaps next time, you could add a greetings in different languages such as Kamusta or Namaste etc. But overall I like your post.
-Elisha Mae-