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Monday, April 8, 2019

The Music was loud

Hey in Music Hurumanu we had a really simple sentence and we had to make them more interesting.
The music was loud.
last night the music was loud.
Last night the pop music was loud.
last night the pop music was loud in the garage.
last night the pop music was echoing loud  in the garage.
black headset on white printer paper
There were two other simple sentences like she played the guitar and he was singing.

Next time I would like to do she played the guitar or he was singing.
BYE.


 

1 comment:

  1. Hello Nevaeh!
    I like the way you add some pictures that related to what your talking about. I also like the way you put some interesting adjectives such as "Echoing". But perhaps next time, you could add a greetings in different languages such as Kamusta or Namaste etc. But overall I like your post.

    -Elisha Mae-

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